Not that Great!!

Nice graphics, but you try to be poetic, yet it juqt doesnt make sence. The story wasnt interesting, and it's simply not very goth...
Try better next time, because you are really good at Flash..;)

Good

But way to easy to make, the story is short and boring. You could also make a menu with 'play' and other links.

Nice graphics

but boring game, its all the same...

Good, but

way too fast, it hurts my eyes and after a while my head started to spin... Nice 3d effect, how did you do it? Write a response please