Not that Great!!
Nice graphics, but you try to be poetic, yet it juqt doesnt make sence. The story wasnt interesting, and it's simply not very goth...
Try better next time, because you are really good at Flash..;)
Not that Great!!
Nice graphics, but you try to be poetic, yet it juqt doesnt make sence. The story wasnt interesting, and it's simply not very goth...
Try better next time, because you are really good at Flash..;)
Good
But way to easy to make, the story is short and boring. You could also make a menu with 'play' and other links.
i didnt make this story up, this was a school assignment
End was very disappointing!
End was very disappointing! But nice though! well done!
Good, but
could be soo much better, first of all, please use the Matrix Font, this makes your movie look better. second: Why use a (i guess) 500:400 width, when you only use 200:400, it a waste of Kb and it makes the movie smaller...
Inspite of that, Well Done!
Let it go!
Millions of people die every day, just because we know 3000 died on 9-11 doesn't make it a special day. Forget those people, nobody cares!!
You
Stole the idea from my "Slug's Quest", but nice graphics though...
No previews....
I just viewed your "Slug's Quest" and they're not even slugs, they're snails. Slugs don't have a shell on their back.
Good!
Make a story though
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